"Our relatively youthful and socially diverse population includes a large component of people,..."
Apparently this conservative isn't sure what else our population includes. But since we liberals try to be half-way fair to our conservative brethren, here's the full sentence, with the proper punctuation inserted: ". Our relatively youthful and socially diverse population includes a large component of people, particularly males[,] with limited skills and education." Still not graceful writing, I wouldn't use the word "component" in this context.
From a Politico opinion piece attacking Obama for his climate change policies.
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